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The inking and layout on this page is fantastic. I’m curious what Emilia has to do w/ all of this
Re last post: I meant page 5.
I love the top corner closed panel. That’s what I feel like at work every Monday!
Re: Page 3 — top panel that is.
Hi Rev. Kellie, You were right. Very cool stuff. Thanks for the link.
Good looking work. If you have an update list put me on it. Will be watching this unfold.
Thanks for all the kinds words! We’re really excited to get this out.
It will be updating M W F.
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Re: turn 7
This is getting stranger and stranger. I like it.
Re: 8 very creepy. I love the spaced-out make-upped face of cornelius; Well done Jared!
Re: 8 – I am so excited for poor Cornelius to wake up/arise and find himself in that attire. I hope Commodore Bear-ington was sprayed with fire retardant as a young toy. He’s going to need it.
Re: 9 Pure Evil.
Re: 10– Didn’t see that coming. Cornelius: “Wow. Wait.” AKA “Dude, you’ve just taken it to the next level.” Very nice.
“Wow. Wait” — That is incredibly awesome….
“it is” “it’s not!”
this is the best layout yet. great narration! great movement! would like to read MOAR!
Agreed. turn 11 looks really good. I love this gag. One time a gun my character wielded in a game of retaliation was turned into a chocolate gun by the next turn. Such twists… love it.
Re: 15 That is evil. Can’t wait to see what Ovy does. Will he deprive a little girl?
This is getting weirder and weirder, lol.
@C_Lem
Ha Ha, just wait, it gets wierder.
Re: turn 23.
You are right. It just got much weirder.
A nice conclusion. Looking forward to #2!
[...] was a character that first appeared in my sketchbook and as a villain in the cliffhanger end of Retaliation: Cornelius and Ovy (another project with Jared). So I started with 7 strips and put them on r/comic_crits to get some [...]